9/1/14: Chapter Summaries Again!

Okay, I've got the majority of the chapter summaries that I assigned people, but there's still a couple I'm missing. I'll give the stragglers until the end of this week, but after that I'll assume I'm not getting that one and just write it myself. Also, if any of you that have turned them in and have not claimed their sketch requests yet still want to, please let me know! If I haven't responded to anyone's message about any of that, my inbox probably ate it or something so please resend! And thank you guys so much for your help with these! <3

September 2014: LouLouBaBa!


Chapter 23: Page 1

27 Oct 2014 04:00 pm

I Say...

Hazumirein says,

HEY LOOK a page.

Sorry, things just got SUPER crazy with work and school for a couple weeks and I didn't have time to even think about comic stuff. It was pretty ridiculous. It was just one of those "EVERYTHING IS HAPPENING AT ONCE" things.

But here's this. Pretty much picking this chapter up where we left off.

Question of the Update: What's up with Morgai in the last panel? Why does she not seem to know what Riza's talking about?

And You Say...

Eleclover2021 says,

I think Morgai doesn't understand what Risa is talking about because Morgai resides in her subconscious so to say, inside the dreamstone, or inside her. So Morgai doesn't know what is going on outside because Morgai doesnt have access to that information of the outside world. If that makes any sense.

LouLouBaBa says,

Le gasp!

Love Riza's expression in the last panel, couldn't stop laughing! And yeah, probable can't see anything that's happening outside, so will Riza not know what's happening if she lets Morgai out?

ZZ Digital says,

Bwaha. I kinda wish I could see Morgai's face in the last panel, not that it could hope to match up to Riza's. (I'm sure she'd like Luna if they meet.)

Going to have to agree, Morgai probably doesn't have access to what's outside the gem.

DuskTheHalfDemon (Guest) says,

Mogai is confused. She doesn't know who "he" (Dae) is. She doesn't know what the **** is going on outside the world she's in. So she has know idea what the heck Riza is talking about.

TCRanch says,


morgai definatly doesn't know what's going on outside riza's subconciousness. i imagine its more like morgai has a sense of time, but is unconscious when riza is'nt in contact with her.

Silaya Arctic Prower says,

....i love her face. its like in one of those anime where someone screws up the plan entirely too hard.

Soriel (Guest) says,

Really good face you gave her, Hazumi.

Comments, anyone?