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Chapter 18: Page 14

February 18th, 2013, 11:00 am

I Say...

Hazumirein says,

Lunos just looks so proud of himself here, I don't even know how that happened, but it makes me laugh.

Also hey! Villain guy's back.

But yeah I think that's it.

Question of the Update: How do you think Villain Dude is going to react to Lunos, well, not exactly doing what he was supposed to?

And You Say...

LordSeth (Guest) says,

Villain Dude: "Here Lunos, have a treat."
Lunos: "Yay!"
Villain Dude: "(This is almost as bad as duck hunt...)"

Groudonkid (Guest) says,

*Lunos opens the bag*
Villain: Hmm... I see you've brought me a snack, but I asked for the librarian.
So it seems you've failed me again...
And as you well know, I do not take failure lightly. Even if there is a bribe involved.
Lunos: O.O

Yeah... I'm a terrible writer. I'm working on it.
I'll be looking forward to the real reaction. Keep up the good work, Hazumirein.

Soriel1 says,

Vilain in old mafioso outfit: I asked for a librarian, not a library rat.

Luno: He's the librarian's apprentice.

Vilain: He doesn't have any of the informations I want. You won't get the money for the job.


Kind of missed inspiration at the end. The vilain really looks like he/she's wearing a mafioso suit. Only missing the hat ''A la Capone'' and the vilain look would be almost perfect. And the cliché of the vilain always hidding behind a tail chair is used correctly.

SailorMoonGirl says,

First off, I'm so glad I found out this was on SJ! I've been reading Dreamcatchers for four years now, and I love it! But I had no idea that it was on SJ until now (I went straight to and didn't notice the connection). I'm so happy!

Second, I think the Villain Dude would say something like: "You didn't bring me the librarian? You will pay for your insolence!"

Comments, anyone?