*Lunos opens the bag*
Villain: Hmm... I see you've brought me a snack, but I asked for the librarian.
So it seems you've failed me again...
And as you well know, I do not take failure lightly. Even if there is a bribe involved.
Yeah... I'm a terrible writer. I'm working on it.
I'll be looking forward to the real reaction. Keep up the good work, Hazumirein.
Vilain in old mafioso outfit: I asked for a librarian, not a library rat.
Luno: He's the librarian's apprentice.
Vilain: He doesn't have any of the informations I want. You won't get the money for the job.
Kind of missed inspiration at the end. The vilain really looks like he/she's wearing a mafioso suit. Only missing the hat ''A la Capone'' and the vilain look would be almost perfect. And the cliché of the vilain always hidding behind a tail chair is used correctly.
First off, I'm so glad I found out this was on SJ! I've been reading Dreamcatchers for four years now, and I love it! But I had no idea that it was on SJ until now (I went straight to dreamcatchercomic.com and didn't notice the connection). I'm so happy!
Second, I think the Villain Dude would say something like: "You didn't bring me the librarian? You will pay for your insolence!"